Wednesday, September 8, 2010

JAIL ?

Waking up I see women that I have never seen What is this place? Jail? I pace the room questioning how I got here and where my boyfriend is? I reach in my pocket hoping there is something in there that will link back to the night before and how I ended up in jail on what I thought was a weekend get away to Las Vegas. The first thing I pull out is a quarter from which I remember playing the slot machines in the casino down in theat t he hotel. But I question how playing slot machines can make you end up in a jail cell. The next thing is my phone with six missed calls from my boyfriend. Unfortunately as soon as I go to listen to the voicemails he has left me my phone dies. Thirdly i find a slip from the bellagio from when i must have cashed in my chips worth three hundred thousand dollars? Three hundred thousand. I did not win that much from just quarter slots. Then i pull out a hotel room key for the Bellagio, which I had not been staying at I thought to myself. I was staying at Caesars Palace. Finally I pulled out a large very expensive diamond. I do not remember getting this. The officer then came to me and said that they had watched the survillence videos and told me I had been framed for a robbery and someone had slipped the reciept for the three thousand dollars and the diamond in my pocket while I was playing the quarter slots. Luckily I was free to go when proven innocent.

3 comments:

  1. Good story, a few gramatical errors and punctuation but overall good detail.

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  2. Good story line but I think you need to slow down when typing because your only making minor grammatical mistakes. Overall good job.

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  3. I enjoyed the story, partly because I haven't read any other ones with an ending like yours.

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